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They left every stone unturned Every rose untouched In the rubble of a shrine Of those who once had loved They lie quietly Faces upturned Towards the sun Their tears vaporize To ascend To become A story that will never end Life begins at the turn Of a long winding way Journeyed in a day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 1:08:00 PM
good poem my friend
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Date: 8/2/2012 11:45:00 AM
Great writing. Strong message.
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:49:00 AM
I remember your wonderful writing on lulu , good to read you again.This made me think of my husband forever looking to the sun.Great writing as usual. Anne
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:06:00 AM
The hope of a happy journey...once this one has reached its end. I love this poem...it touches a place in me. Will make it one of my favorites so I can re-read at will. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Again..nice to see you on the Soup !! God Bless !!
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:57:00 AM
A profound, captivating and moving read. I love this write. You are awesome. I kept your information verses www.lulu.com/spotlight/bullbla and will order soon. Million thx for the info. I've also deleted carefree as I wanted to delete my comments...had no choice but to delete the poem in order to do this. I will post it again later...perhaps tonight. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated! Love, Sue
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Date: 1/12/2012 11:29:00 PM
Love lives on even after the journey especially in the hearts of those left behind- blessings- enjoyed your poem, Brenda
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