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Ascension

His spirit took flight Like a snowy white dove With the sun on its wings. It flew toward the clouds And disappeared Leaving only a breath of Wonder in its wake. © 2013 Connie Marcum Wong Happy Easter to everyone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/30/2013 2:33:00 PM
Fantastic!!!
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Date: 4/30/2013 2:32:00 PM
Dear Connie: What a wonderful poem. Direct and to the point. You have painted a beautiful picture of this most awesome event. PEACE!
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Date: 4/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
Glad I happened upon this amazing poem! Very inspiring!
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Date: 4/16/2013 8:58:00 PM
Leaving only a breath of wonder....(Love that line!!).....I would love to borrow that sometime, Connie!!
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful, Connie! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:56:00 PM
Your beautiful poem here would look so great with the picture you showed me. Happy Easter , sweet friend.
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Date: 3/31/2013 1:18:00 PM
sweet and lovely. thank you.
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