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Below is the poem entitled Ascension which was written by poet Jodi Hill. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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We left life
So our Angels fly
We spread our wings
But do not die

We are not the Dead
We simply just ...
Left life instead

We will not die
Our spirits are young
We are the Elderly
Our song we've sung

'Fore our minds bathe in memories
In stories that are told
The memories are young
We are Old

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:46:00 PM
    awesome write thank you for sharing and welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:45:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Jodi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol