As Time Goes By

Blind date With fate ------------------------------------- ~ Not for contest ~ Inspired by Alexis's Footle entry.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2015 3:53:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..These are not so easy to write but this one has good meaning..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 7/14/2015 4:20:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting, Sara; you are always a welcome visitor:) All the best. // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/11/2015 7:52:00 AM

Love this Paul. Very apt. hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Kim! Have just been reading your pastel reflections and the ordeal you went through:) Have a lovely weekend. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2015 11:28:00 PM

why not for the contest?? I enjoyed it!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2015 4:28:00 PM

I am glad that you enjoyed it, Andrea. I entered another instead, and as you know by now, it did not let me down. (See my reply to Alexis). // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/8/2015 9:06:00 PM

Paul,this is beautiful. It has a happy ending.You should enter. Great job! :-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 12:18:00 AM

I'm glad that you like it, Alexis:) But were it not for your first line I would not have thought of it!! It clicked when I read your entry, so the merit is also yours:) Have a lovely day! // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2015 7:34:00 PM

Oh you should enter Paul, this is really good!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2015 4:34:00 PM

Sorry on my late reply, Casarah! Have a lot on my plate at the moment...busy playing catching up. I could not enter this for contest since the inspiration was Alexis's own entry! hugs // paul

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2015 6:40:00 PM

sounds like it turned out OK....nice one.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2015 4:41:00 PM

Thank you, John :) // paul