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As the Snow Flitters Down

As the snow flitters down, time seperates to reveal your beauteous face --- So for one moment I stand transfixed --- In the distance, I hear the cry of a falcon --- Sailing above me, I see it has a field mouse --- Flying out of view, I can imagine my own life paraleling this tiny rodent's --- As destiny, like the falcon, brings me to my ultimate fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/25/2010 1:50:00 PM
this is one of your best, Sheol. GREAT message and analogy.glad you liked my Xmas poem. I have a lot of Xmas song parodies! LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:31:00 PM
Very moving poem...enjoyed...Marty
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