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As Taylor Falls

I stayed in On a rising sun I won’t make The same mistake I found a lovers garden And a gardens lake The same mistake I won’t make I won’t fall And not get back To my feet I wont stand And not expect To fall again I saw smiles In the devils wine A burgundy tint Such a lovely shine I relax below A melody I journey on Through scars You don’t see I wouldn’t think Of failures at all But I saw peace At Taylor’s Fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/15/2009 12:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one ^.^ It's got that interesting change in tone halfway through when an image is introduced "smiles in the devil's wine" which I very much enjoyed. I really love that image, hands down my favorite of this poem. Great job!
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