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As Spring Is Felt

=============================== Drops of rain off Winters' pelt, pelt Earth into refrain below Below the soil, as spring is felt, felt springs uncoil through melting snow ===============================

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/27/2016 1:27:00 AM

Packs a punch in a just a few lines. Like your dramatic language like "flung" and "pelt" ... original seeing as spring is typically thought of as gentle and easy going ... congrats on you HM!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/25/2016 4:04:00 PM

Hi Lycia, a beautiful song of Spring. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I give this write a seven and i put it in my faves....Vlad.

Constance La France

Date: 7/22/2015 8:12:00 AM

Lycia, you have penned a very lovely Rhyme of spring waiting beneath the snow, visual, beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances . .

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/22/2015 12:31:00 PM

Thank you pretty BW! xoxo