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As Solitude Rains

```` As the sunset of life beckons me in marmalade farewells, orange sherbet adieus, I stroll in uneven footsteps, not sure of the bridges I crossed or those burned in the process Alone I follow the polished pebbles scattered along this lethargic path, nary a word or whisper, only my thoughts peering back on what was, stumbling when your memory finds me Dark tangerine hints touch the sky for the day, this day, my life shall soon disappear beyond the slumbering valley, diminishing into a minute speck hiding in plain sight where no one can see or care I listen unsuccessfully for its sad melody of fractured bar chords and minor notes when I again feel you invading my soul, reaching down from my heart, the place you still reside Inaudible tones offer I am sorry for the pain, the weight I did not realize I carried, collections of hurt in shiny bows and pretty paper that sent you away from me, as solitude now rains in gift-wrapped droplets Softer my dampened steps move towards that straight line illusion summoning, darker still as minutes pass for I know this end is mine alone as the moon crests the horizon and I slowly fade away For the Silence poetry contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 9/7/2019 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win with this amazing poem, Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend. : )
Date: 9/6/2019 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, this is so stirring, especially the haunting last two lines-
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Michelle. I am happy you liked this.
Date: 9/6/2019 5:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Chris :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend
Date: 9/5/2019 9:53:00 PM
Wow another win congrats dear poet, you are now definitely the belle of the ball. lol
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Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:36:00 AM
Ha, thanks John. I don't know about that but I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 9/5/2019 5:22:00 PM
As solitude rains in gift wrapped droplets...love that line especially! Congrats on your win.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so very much Jeanne for your kind words on my poem.
Date: 9/5/2019 4:16:00 PM
Wow! Chris, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis. I really appreciate you stopping by today
Date: 9/5/2019 3:46:00 PM
I knew this one was worthy of first place ..it wowed me in its beauty. Congrats Chris. Awesome win :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 3:49:00 PM
I was just about to say the same thing to you. : ) Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 9/5/2019 3:02:00 PM
Chris, this gorgeous poem deserves its first place honor! It is written so beautifully it is going into my Faves! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Connie, so very much. I am so happy you liked this one. Your kind words are always a wonderful gift to me.
Date: 9/5/2019 2:53:00 PM
The imagery in this is just great... you explained a broken heart very well... congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much. It was a fun contest to write for and I am honored to have placed so high.
Date: 8/31/2019 12:02:00 AM
This is fantastic Chris! I am betting I will see this at the top. You raised the bar very high! Excellent my friend. xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 9/2/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I always smile when you stop by my page. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 8/30/2019 4:48:00 PM
Wow! Chris, What a good entry for the contest theme. I enjoyed the title and content. You have a way with words and you know how to use them." Inaudible tones offer I am sorry for the pain" was a good line. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, it means a lot to me when you stop by to read. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 8/30/2019 3:00:00 PM
I can feel the weight of this as the most beautiful sunset leads to your darkest day. And all I want to do is add something... anything... to ease the silence! Great job portraying it ~
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 3:31:00 PM
I think you just did with your wonderful comment. Thank you so much, I really wasn't too sure about this one, but now it doesn't seem so bad. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 8/30/2019 2:03:00 PM
Wow. Love the imagery you sewn into this piece, I can feel the fades of life as it echoes in the solitude... great entry for the contest in my opinion :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandy. I struggled with this and I'm still not sure it meets the theme, but it sounded quiet as I was writing it. : )
Date: 8/30/2019 2:02:00 PM
Wow chris stunning once again!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/30/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Brenda. I am happy you liked this one.

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