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As She Exits the Stream

As I sit on the bank beside this clear running stream I look on in awe as if I am in a dream My girl, my love swims in the translucent so pure Her curvaceous shape in the ripples allure Breaststroke to backstroke as she shares with me As the undulations of the waves caress her so free As she exits the stream my eyes are in capture My heart, my thoughts it total rapture Her ebony locks cascade down her back Whilst her body gleams for she doesn't lack Towards me she walks through the greenest of grasses My love, my girl the most beautiful of lassies We lie facing each other sharing sweet meadow kisses Our minds in unison knowing our bodies have wishes Beside the clear running stream we shared each other Under a canopy of green two souls in discover http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-13.php

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Date: 9/5/2010 7:16:00 AM
Lovely images of the curvacious girl swimming and approaching you on the shore, James. Love poems are your forte'. I'm out of town for the holiday. Hope you are enjoying a nice weekend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/4/2010 11:40:00 AM
awesome, absolutely love it
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Date: 9/4/2010 10:56:00 AM
Mr Fraser, me love your couplet..images are breathtaking.. I just love the way you leave the conclusion up to the reader in this one.. Hope you have a stunner of a weekend :) Wilma
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Date: 9/4/2010 10:00:00 AM
wowowoowowowow you are a passionate one james ..i love it sarah xx
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