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As Seen Through My Screen Door

Through the mesh of myriad squares, that filters both vision and sun. I look upon the world out there, as each new day has begun. Trees sway in the pattern, as roses bloom beyond the veil. I hear the birds conversing, while in my home, safe and well. If someone comes a calling, I need not let them in. The screen door has a latch. A "Keep Out" guardian. Here a peaceful calm resides, within my field of vision. No signs of crime or traffic noise. No interaction intrusion. The world shows me just beauty, its best foot forward impression. Hiding from me its ugly side, the one of dying compassion. Wooden frame and mesh my savior. When I cry at my very core, I look out through the world's mask, as seen through my screen door. Paula Swanson 7/15/2011 For the contest, It's Mask Time! Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Placement: 5th

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Date: 7/24/2011 6:18:00 PM
now this is beautiful poetry Paula. Congratulations to you
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Date: 7/24/2011 3:57:00 PM
Congrats Paula on another awesome win with yet another creative masterpiece my friend.. always enjoy your creative lines luv...
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/24/2011 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 7/24/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Mask" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/24/2011 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 7/23/2011 3:28:00 PM
Paula, Congratulations on your accomplished entry. Agape, Moses
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/24/2011 4:45:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/15/2011 7:43:00 PM
If this one doesn't score high, I will be very surprised. Way to do the contest challenge, Paula. An unusual topic but thinking outside the box. LUv, Andrea
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/24/2011 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I tend to go so far outside the box at times, that I can't get back in

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