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As One

As One Warm soft sighs mingle with dancing entangled heat The essence of need bears witness to the splendor as two become one at last
For the contest: Love Note Sponsored by Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful, Paula, Many congrats on your top notch win. Elaine
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:33:00 PM
gorgeous love poem, Paula. Sorry I have not seen so much of you lately. HOpe you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:11:00 PM
Paula, congrats on your win with this passionate tanka! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/22/2013 4:34:00 PM
Lovely poem, Paula! Nice to see you posting your poems again!!
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:58:00 AM
Wonderful win! congrats. BG
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Date: 6/22/2013 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this passionate Tanka! :)
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