Get Your Premium Membership

As Long As I Am Alive

As long as I am alive....... Always, your soul reside in my heart Our love is not like gloomy, bright like sunshine We share our wonderful feelings without hesitation I immerse you completely into me when you give me yourself You purified my soul and brought out my emotions I never knew that your love will bring out my real life There's so much love unfolding from my heart and its need your love to free from my loneliness Sometimes its aches because we are far apart Sometimes tears slips down my face because your part of my bed is vacant and kept me sad A kiss on my lips could wet my heart with heaviness I will always love you even when the rain wash me out or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/13/2013 8:22:00 PM
This just tore at my heart with its beauty....
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2013 8:05:00 PM
This is beautiful Ravi. i can tell it came from the heart. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Date: 11/4/2013 7:40:00 PM
very emotional and heartfelt poem. such a great love!!
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated Andrea. Hugs Ravi
Date: 11/4/2013 3:38:00 PM
A sad but beautiful write full of emotion and so touching thank you for sharing. cheri I'm so glad you enjoy my lone universe poem thank you my friend for your comment.
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 8:19:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Ravi! Simply beautiful, straight from the heart! Excellent! Always, Annalise
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
Beautiful, Ravi. I hope you read this out loud to the person it was written for. Nice one, my friend. Licia :-)
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 12:39:00 PM
Some lucky person will enjoy getting this romantic work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 8:42:00 AM
such a lovely heartfelt poem...a love like that never dies...enjoyed this one today :)
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 8:05:00 AM
you speak from a heart full of devotion, ravi... lovely piece and lovely expression of what lies in your heart!..:) huggs
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/10/2013 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 11/3/2013 7:19:00 AM
- I think there is plenty of room in your heart to everlasting love for your loved ones, Ravi - Beautiful poem!! - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Sathasivam Avatar
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/3/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Love and hugs Anne.

Book: Shattered Sighs