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As J Durante Would Say Stop the Motion

Aloft in the sky over Memphis Elvis Presley's hub I saw a sight necessitating my eyes to firmly rub A passenger plane a big one frozen plainly in sight this sight I saw could not comprehend trying hard as I might The backdrop a high rise the benchmark Serving to clearly define This sight I was seeing I clearly saw and was not losing my mind Whether glitch of the matrix Or new avion tech I seen what I saw As I said What the heck

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/6/2022 6:31:00 AM

Motion sickness can really be debilitating. :)

Vickey Rhymer
Date: 10/6/2022 12:11:00 PM

I wondered when writing this if the beginning would confuse as to if I was in the air Linda.I was in the passenger seat of a car and saw the plane at multiple angles never progressing beyond the building lateral to it.I have seen this twice since then but never as clearly as that day. Looked this up on YouTube and found not the only one to have seen this phenomenon.Thanks for reading and stopping by to say hi.