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As If We Never Said Goodbye

Charcoal brush adorning sparkling bristles of love weaves patterns on canvas of blank memory flashing waves entrancing visions of kisses alight blankets of amnesia in existence but he paints hustling vintage platform emerging from mists breeze in lover's red shirt chasing scarlet sunsets he boards a crimson wagon longing for a goodbye June 21, 2020 ON BROADWAY Poetry Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud Title: As If We Never Said Goodbye ~Winner: 4th Place

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Date: 8/23/2020 1:16:00 PM
A plaintive cry from a yearning heart, Aditi. I always look forward to your imagery that is not just creative but remains in the heart. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/8/2020 7:37:00 PM
A lovely romantic write, Aditi. I love your sprinkling in gentle hints of painting: bristles, charcoal, canvas, paint. You have inspired me to try doing something of the like. More fabulous poetry from your platinum pen, I can't seem to get enough! You are a blessing, my friend ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/9/2020 1:03:00 AM
I am really thankful to your for visiting this muse and blessing me with your valuable review. Glad you love my words dear friend! Thank you for being a constant source of inspiration :)
Date: 6/23/2020 5:59:00 AM
Wonderful sentiments ...
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for your wishes Kai :)
Date: 6/22/2020 7:08:00 PM
Your imagery poetically expressed so beautifully! Well penned!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/23/2020 2:00:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Caren :) God bless you
Date: 6/21/2020 7:04:00 PM
Whew, this poignant gem brought a tear to my eyes as it hits a little too close to home for me, Aditi. Magnificent, as usual! GL on Nette's contest, my friend!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:58:00 AM
I am glad my words resonate with your emotions Edward! Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation. God bless you :)
Date: 6/21/2020 2:04:00 PM
A lot of darkness in this goodbye... I could feel the sadness..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/22/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank you for absorbing my words :) Really honored by your visit. God bless you

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