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As I Recall

As I recall I sat here with you once on this old log in the woods and sealed our love by carving our names on this log many moons ago The log has aged and so have I But the memory of you still lingers It lingers on the ideal times we spent together building our dreams one dollar at a time with money left for love and wine then fortune shone upon us things got better and we created a pompous air then things got bitter and I did'nt care what really mattered most in our life As I recall we wasted words in anger and left a void so many times that took so long to fill then you were ill your health had waned I did'nt believe but I asked your God for a chance to change to redeem myself before its too late what really mattered most in our life in order to rebuild my soul to be the man you knew as kind to please make you better one more time My wish was short lived but I cherished each moment while you were there you left me a gift and asked me to rediscover where we both began As I recall it was this spot where on this log our names still show my name has faded but yours is visible for I dug yours deeper and now I know, dearest oh, yes now I know © Ralph L. Sergi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/28/2015 10:46:00 PM
Ralph, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/29/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Skat A.
Date: 1/18/2015 4:13:00 AM
deeply touched by this warm piece, serge.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:01:00 AM
:) KUDOS.. :) SUPERB WRITE.. :)
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:46:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats Ralph...huggs
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/18/2015 8:39:00 AM
Hi KAYOD: Thank you. i ENJOYED WRITING IT.
Date: 1/17/2015 3:13:00 PM
Hi Ralph! This is lovely, romantic, touching, and sad. Sent vibes to my heart. Congratulations on a very merited win. #7 All the best. // paul
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:47:00 PM
Dropping back to say Many congrats on your win Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:12:00 AM
Wow, Ralph this write is so touching. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on the win Ralph.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/17/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, John, nice to know you. I also enjoyed your Coyote poem. very descriptive with a sense of foreboding.
Date: 1/17/2015 4:28:00 AM
Congrats on the very win, a great write, Ralph
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Date: 1/14/2015 6:32:00 PM
I seem to have been drawn back to this one again, yep it's still great!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/17/2015 9:27:00 AM
Merci, Richard.
Date: 12/29/2014 6:55:00 PM
This is so touching and romantic. I hope this is from imagination and not a real loss you have experienced, if so I offer my condolances.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/29/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Richard: It is from my imagination.Have a Happy New Year, Amigo.
Date: 12/24/2014 5:14:00 AM
Lovely romantic expressions, Ralph, Merry Christmas
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/24/2014 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram and I also wish you Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/23/2014 9:20:00 PM
Such a beautiful and romantic pen Ralph! I truly enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/24/2014 9:17:00 AM
Thank you, Dorian God Bless and havea happy holiday.
Date: 12/23/2014 6:23:00 PM
such a tender romantic write Ralph love the imagery and especially the sentiment in the final stanza:-) hugs jan - its a 7 from me:-)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/24/2014 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Jan and have a happy holiday.

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