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As I Look At the Sky

(Hourglass poem) I look at the sky and see clouds Blush and cover sun as they flood And light grows small as they go by I watch them as they cross the sky I see clouds change into weird shapes Sometimes the sky is a blue grape But there are times when it turns gray And that's when the sun fades away Looking at the sky is quite nice I'd love to watch it more than twice As they glow in the night so bright And count stars in the sky at night And count stars in the sky at night As they glow in the night so bright I'd love to watch it more than twice Looking at the sky is quite nice And that's when the sun fades away But there are times when it turns gray Sometimes the sky is a blue grape I see clouds change into weird shapes I watch them as they cross the sky And light grows small as they go by Blush and cover sun as they flood I look at the sky and see clouds! :-) Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 August 25,2009

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Date: 11/19/2009 12:50:00 AM
Excellent Dorian.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:58:00 AM
Clouds and starry skies giv us always new impressions. I still keep watching clouds as they transform. A well written poem, Dorian. And thans for commentig my Haiku Autumn...Gert
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:15:00 PM
An intriguing poem Dorian, I've done some sky gazing in my younger days myself. Sincerely Moses
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