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As I Look Above Visions of You There

As I look above visions of you there A place and time zone beyond the sun A third heaven where we'll talk and eat You, myself and I am in paradise Moments of love and peace we share Even though it's a like dreamland As I look above visions of you there The figment in my mind of this place, And I know you're gone from earth, In my grief I have visions of you I'm awake but in a vegetable state In suffering, memories will never vanish Not here can we can come to table talk A surreal life I cannot forget in time I thought it possible. I wipe away the tear, As I look above visions of you there I see this unapproachable light coming And palace glowing like the sun far off Two angels holding fire swords at the gate guarding the numerous rooms and protecting the holy angels that sing This vision I can not fully describe Its starlight, beauty, and majesty As I look above visions of you there A third heaven where we'll talk and eat

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Date: 7/10/2013 9:03:00 AM
Hello Eddie, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:37:00 AM
Eddie-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/10/2013 4:06:00 AM
- Hi Eddie, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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