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As I lay Here

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As I lay Here

as I lay here dying 
my life is flashing before
my eyes and all I 
see is pain and misery
what did i do wrong 
to deserve this type 
of death bleeding 
with no end in sight

as i lay dying 
as i lay dying 
there is no one here 
to say my last words to
as i lay dying
as i lay dying 
why do i have to 
endure all of this agony

as i lay here dying 
its starting to get 
colder with every passing 
hour now its minutes
its starting to get 
darker around the 
edges and will i finally leave
this vile and revolting world

as i lay dying 
as i lay dying 
there is no one here 
to say my last words to
as i lay dying
as i lay dying 
why do i have to 
endure all of this agony

even if i leave this 
world what will others 
remember about me will 
they remember me at all 
will they realize that 
i have done so much 
in my short life to 
help others through pain

as i lay dying 
as i lay dying 
there is no one here 
to say my last words to
as i lay dying
as i lay dying 
why do i have to 
endure all of this agony

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  1. Date: 1/11/2011 3:44:00 PM
    Great Job, painting a picture with words, welcome to poetrysoup

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 12:18:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight so touching.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 7:21:00 AM
    A deep strong write my dear...welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to more of your work...Michael