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As I Lay Here

as I lay here dying my life is flashing before my eyes and all I see is pain and misery what did i do wrong to deserve this type of death bleeding with no end in sight as i lay dying as i lay dying there is no one here to say my last words to as i lay dying as i lay dying why do i have to endure all of this agony as i lay here dying its starting to get colder with every passing hour now its minutes its starting to get darker around the edges and will i finally leave this vile and revolting world as i lay dying as i lay dying there is no one here to say my last words to as i lay dying as i lay dying why do i have to endure all of this agony even if i leave this world what will others remember about me will they remember me at all will they realize that i have done so much in my short life to help others through pain as i lay dying as i lay dying there is no one here to say my last words to as i lay dying as i lay dying why do i have to endure all of this agony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2011 3:44:00 PM
Great Job, painting a picture with words, welcome to poetrysoup
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:18:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight so touching.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/9/2011 7:21:00 AM
A deep strong write my dear...welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to more of your work...Michael
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