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As I Lay

As I woke up in the morning, I didn't smell your sweet scent, I miss your smile as you began to go down. As our eye's meet,while you continue to eat. The moan's you make, as if your eating a piece cake. You lick me like I'm a limondrop, as I stroke you keeping you hard as a rock. As the blood rushes to both of our heads, our body's melting into the bed. I take your hand into mine, as our body's intertwine. I look up at you, one last time, saying to myself you'll alway's be mine. Then I realize I'm stareing at a wall, and you were never really here at all!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2013 2:37:00 AM
omg so in love with this poem! great write and congrats on being featured
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 2/17/2013 8:50:00 AM
Awww thanks Monica.
Date: 2/15/2013 5:10:00 PM
wow..Twanna, you should enter this in Cyndi's spicy contest.., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 2/17/2013 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Poet destroyer :-)
Date: 5/18/2012 4:40:00 PM
Wow!!! No comment..lol..smh
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 5/18/2012 4:47:00 PM
lol...oh wow I hope dats a good thing.
Date: 12/6/2011 3:52:00 PM
A real "Cold Shower" read!!! great flow... Michael
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/14/2011 3:29:00 PM
Lol...thanks Michael...so silly....lol...thank you. :)
Date: 12/6/2011 4:58:00 AM
* "PS. I FIND MYSELF COMPLETELY MESMERIZED BY THE FIRST FEW LINES OF THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM * 'SWEET SCENTS * EYES MEETING * MOANS' * I LOVE IT * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * TWAS JUST STOPPING BACK BY TO THANK YOU LOVELY FOR THE KIND VISIT * JOY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/6/2011 11:13:00 AM
Aww! ...Thank you Sarah :)
Date: 12/5/2011 11:48:00 AM
* "PS. * I MUST FAVOURITE YOUR BEAUTY * BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * A JEWEL TO FOREVER BE CHERISHED * KEEP PAINTING MY DEAR * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/5/2011 11:59:00 AM
Aww your da best! :)
Date: 12/5/2011 11:45:00 AM
* "OWWW, BUT WHAT A SWEEET DREAM * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * I LOVE THE EROTIC & DETAILED INTENSITY & PASSION WITHIN YOUR RADIANT BEAUTIES MAGNIFICENT PAINTING * CAPTURES HEARTS & SETS AFLAME BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS & DREAMS * BURN DOWN THE WALLS THAT LOVE MAY RISE * BEYOUND THE EDGES OF TIME * PURE BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/5/2011 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Sarah... Im so happy you enjoyed reading it :)

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