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As I Drown

As I drown Struggling masculine waves trapped amidst whirlpool, Tides cuddled my soul as ocean of fears rolled. Enormous vast sea beyond farthest sights, Engulfed our titanic such worst plight. Profound last supper eternal love dance, Loud notes of music broken strings, tranquil. Rescue sounds in air as if a chopper, Then the harsh alarm and I find myself awake! Written August 1st, 2015 For contest " poem with a chilling twist" by Frank Herrara

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/3/2015 8:26:00 PM
Your title is so strong, and drew me in. Enjoyed your poem and looks like it will do well in the contest.
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:07:00 PM
great pen Dr Upma gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:24:00 AM
- Wow ..... glad it was just a nightmare - Good luck in the contest, it will reach high Dr. Upma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/2/2015 11:56:00 AM
Thnx dear Anne Lise!
Date: 8/2/2015 10:37:00 AM
Dear Dr.Upma a beautiful poem....i enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for sha ring....ending is a happy one! Love, Anulaxmi:-)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/2/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thnx for ur visit Anu! Yeah it's a happy one n not chilling!
Date: 8/2/2015 10:10:00 AM
fighting, alarming , and grateful it wasn't reality good write for the contest good luck Hugs Eve
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/2/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thnx for ur critical comments Eve! Will try editing or writing another one!

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