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As I Die

As I die, I see no light, I see no hand reaching out. When I lived, Nobody payed attention, no one listened. As I go into darkness, It's black and I can't breathe. My lungs burn for oxygen. My eyesthrive to see. My heart urges to beat. Within five minutes, I'm gone forever. I'm no longer ignored. I am not there. I've lived and I've died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/10/2012 1:32:00 PM
Smile my friend Victoria...and the world will smile back.Life can be a happy journey. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/18/2012 12:07:00 PM
I stopped by your poetry today to see if you have written anything new Victoria. I hope that you will pick up your pen and write a new poem very soon and share it with us. Love, Carol
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