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As God Is

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as sun is witness moon sits on a bank of clouds day’s trial begins.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/13/2021 12:43:00 PM

Richard says bring on the day.'As we live in this A dayless night-time manufactured darkness Is walled in on small screens mainframe fed Buying and selling the bodies and souls of Humans buying by bribing officials and usury Held businesses to sell their collateral the flocks Of consuming offerings dumbed down masked Consenters to a masked protocol the overseers Look through ' virtual windows they judge which Next move? Many nations nod acceptance yet Not all leaders will, said well Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/16/2021 6:51:00 AM

I wonder if a trial date has been set yet?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2021 5:36:00 AM

I say bring on the day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2021 4:18:00 AM

I really like it when there is a view of both the sun and moon so easily seen. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/4/2021 12:59:00 PM

Sara: So nice to read your comment and I sincerely enjoy your work too, SuZ

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/21/2021 2:42:00 PM

beautifully painted

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2020 6:41:00 PM

oh this is so good, Suzanne. Merry Christmas to you and may it be a wonderful new year

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 12/4/2020 7:22:00 PM

Beautiful haiku and photo to match!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/29/2020 12:46:00 AM

Reminds me of the song 'Lucky old sun rolling around heaven all day' Superb haiku, says everything about the human race.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/1/2020 4:48:00 AM

Hi Harry...always happy when you stop by. Yes we have some predictability in life. Day must become night. Best, SuZ

L. J. Carber

Date: 11/27/2020 7:59:00 AM

Quite a good haiku, Suz

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/27/2020 8:14:00 AM

Hello Len: Thanks for your nice comment. I was doing a series of Haiku to get my Muse to wake up. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2020 2:33:00 AM

Hopefully, after a good night's sleep, with God's help we face (and overcome) the trials of a new day! ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend:) Warm regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/27/2020 8:12:00 AM

Hi Paul: I am keeping well but days seems to get wings this time of year. Already time to finish up Christmas cards etc. Best, SuZ

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/21/2020 9:44:00 AM

Splendid haiku, Suzanne, with beautiful thought and picture accompanying it. Many thanks for your kind comments re the Grandeur of Autumn. Happy Thanksgiving and best wishes as you continue your poetical journey. Bob H

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/27/2020 8:11:00 AM

Thanks so much, Robert: I appreciate your visits always, SuZ