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As Autumn's Breeze

Pleasant cool feet of The autumn breeze caressing Larks for the last time For nostrils are already Itching to sneeze out moisture Earth in Thimpu now Looks back and pauses a while Why good bye so soon But the unrelenting sun Moves off inviting Jack Frost On the window pane Snowflakes hug evening gross beak Snow crystals look on Adorning the bare tree branch Snow skating park underneath Lovely small snow balls Silver gossamer on trees Snow sleet in the rain Blizzard of dislike waiting Fond suns are always fragile _________________________________ 31/8/2016

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Date: 9/7/2016 8:48:00 PM
Very, very nice poem. I love autumn also :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/8/2016 5:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/31/2016 7:53:00 PM
A tease from an autumn breeze...very well written my friend...I can feel a chill already lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/31/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/31/2016 1:12:00 PM
- It is seldom snow in Norway in the autumn, often rain and wind - A lovely image in your poems, Probir - (do you have snow in India?) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2016 11:18:00 PM
we do have snow in winter in India in places like Kashmir, Simla, Darjeeling etc. , but not where I live, ... in the poem, however, the place referred to is Thimpu, which is in Bhutan ... thank you for reading my poem and expressing curiosity ....
Date: 8/31/2016 12:27:00 PM
Great imagery! Nature is a wonder.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/31/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you ...

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