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As Autumn's Breeze

As Autumn's breeze begins to blow, we see the falling flakes of snow accumulate and start to grow. It's such a show! It's such a show! Jack Frost brings forth his crystals clear, while in the woods are wary deer, preparing for the winter year. They've much to fear! They've much to fear! The children skating on the rink, will sometimes fall in ice's chink; they sip hot chocolate for their drink, then catch a wink, then catch a wink. A blizzard strikes with fury great; the children must now cease their skate and bide 'neath pine to know their fate. And so they wait, and so they wait. When finally they all can see that snow has spared the great pine tree, they jump and romp and say "Whoopee!" They are carefree! They are carefree!

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/5/2016 12:01:00 AM

Perfect holiday poem. :-)

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/7/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thanks. Fall and winter are my favorite seasons.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/3/2016 6:21:00 PM

I love the monotetra form you have used - thanks for bringing to my notice I may give it a go one day:-) hugs Jan xx

Randy Steele

Date: 9/3/2016 6:04:00 PM

Nice piece, Terry. Congrats on your placement. Like the form.

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/7/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thanks. I write monotetras a lot.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/3/2016 5:08:00 PM

Terry, Congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/7/2016 2:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot. A surprise.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/3/2016 4:53:00 PM

Very good poem, Terry, wonderful rhyme scheme, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/3/2016 5:38:00 PM

Thanks a lot. I cannot believe I placed in the contest. I have only been on the site about two weeks or so. It is a thrill!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2016 4:14:00 PM

I love your repeating lines in this enchanting monorhyme Terry. Congratulations on your placement on this short list! ; ) 7

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/3/2016 5:36:00 PM

Thanks so much. It is good to know that I have the right category, since I write a lot of these. It is one of my favorite forms.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/3/2016 4:15:00 PM

I understand their is no category for this form and it is closest to monorhyme. Cheers, Connieb: )

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/3/2016 3:22:00 PM

as previously mentioned not a monorhyme Terry but it is an excellent rhyming poem congrats on placing

Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/3/2016 4:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for liking it. Again, it is a monotetra and that is not a category on this site. Where would I put it?

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/29/2016 4:17:00 PM

A very good rhyming poem x great fun x

Terry Hoffman
Date: 8/29/2016 4:22:00 PM

Thanks very much. Wrote it for a contest by that name, where you had to use that as they title and there was also a word list. You should check it out.