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As Autumn's Breeze

Crimson leaflets w i s p like a tornado, piles of kid fun my daughter starts to make. The cool brisk air will soon turn into snow, as the autumn b r e e z e will turn into flakes. December arrives and white dust covers, a blizzard falls and snowmen are then made, Time for romantic skating with lovers, as the cold twilight moon begins to f a d e. Gazing out my bay window in pure awe, g l o w i n g ice crystals hang on my awning. I swear that chilly, cold Jack Frost I saw, sipping on hot cocoa, I start yawning. The bosom of the short days surround me, embers from the safe fireplace warm my chill. Radiant * * *sparkles * * * fill my Christmas tree, as the snow-capped pine trees gently stand still. Mother Nature birthed beauty with such e a s e, with the dawn of Winter from Autumn’s b r e e z e. 12 September 2016

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Date: 8/31/2016 6:36:00 AM
Very beautiful poem, Laura:) A winner for sure:)
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Date: 8/31/2016 12:50:00 PM
thanks lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 8/24/2016 3:03:00 PM
fabulous imagery LuLoo and I love the final couplet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:10:00 AM
thank you lovely Jan :)-luloo
Date: 8/24/2016 1:04:00 PM
Very lovely Laura...I'm wishing the shorter days and cooler weather is not coming this year but I know it is inevitable with my last one starting school today.
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:09:00 AM
I hear ya! Ella starts on the 6th, but she has strep throat right now :( good luck with the school year, sometimes we need it! lol thanks Tim :)-luloo

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