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As Autumn Unfolds

Summer wearily sighed then softly closed her door. For three months she lingered, and now she'd slumber while Fall lays a carpet of leaves upon the forest floor. Her winds gather them together, in profuse number, bronze, russet and crimson, all fringed in burnt umber. In a cloudless sky, the cry of migrating birds is heard, flying to a warmer climate as Autumn begins to unfold. When Nature births a new season, changes are spurred. A saffron sun warms the Earth with fingers of gold, and a harvest moon ascends; glorious sights to behold. Autumn days are emblazoned with dazzling coloration, painting vibrant scenes like no other season can bestow. I welcome her annual arrival with joyous acclamation, knowing the nights will be filled with starlight aglow before Winter laces the landscape with flakes of snow. ~October 14, 2020~ ~Autumn Quintain ~ Sponsored by Francine Roberts

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Date: 12/3/2020 4:58:00 PM
what stunning imagery Jenna, many congrats on your placement:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/27/2021 3:12:00 AM
Many thanks, Jan.
Date: 12/3/2020 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love Autumn and I love your write. "Beautiful" I feel like I am in your story. Enjoy your win and day................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/27/2021 3:11:00 AM
It's my favorite season. Thank you, Paula.
Date: 12/3/2020 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna on your lovely Autumn open win. Nicely penned. SuZ
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/27/2021 3:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Suzanne.
Date: 10/17/2020 5:05:00 AM
You paint such beautiful imagery with your pen, Jenna, you have captured the essence of Autumn. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for liking these lines, John. Hugs.
Date: 10/15/2020 9:18:00 AM
That’s a very beautiful poem, quite picturesque with amazing imagery! Great ink my friend!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/15/2020 12:46:00 PM
I appreciate your generous thoughts, Mark. Thank you.
Date: 10/14/2020 3:56:00 PM
There is a lot of warmth & joy in these lines. "Saffron Sun"...a prime example of such. I very much enjoyed reading this!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thanks for liking this one, Tacito.
Date: 10/14/2020 8:55:00 AM
Jenna, your imagery is enrapturing. I love Autumn and you've captured its essence in the metaphorical beauty of your poem... I especially loved: " A saffron sun warms the Earth with fingers of gold" - the vibrancy touches me to my core. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks, Susan.

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