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As Above So Below

stories hung aloft above us since time immemorial connecting the dots... ...beauty in variety before Adam named the animals God named stars PS. This LUNE form is kind of interesting...

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 4/29/2021 7:38:00 PM

"God named stars." Thank you for sharing this eye opening short short, thought provoking. I am in awe of stars and believe there's so much more to stars than we'll ever know.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/14/2021 7:31:00 AM

Delightful, Timothy ~

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/15/2021 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2021 4:43:00 PM

I am very surprised I never saw this before. I LOVE this short form. Great poem and message.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2021 10:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! It's quite incredible the sheer number of poetry forms out there!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/23/2021 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2021 10:24:00 PM

Thanks Juliet!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2021 7:10:00 AM

I’m looking forward to some new posts Timothy.:0)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/23/2021 9:36:00 AM

I have one new one anyway that I just posted.

David Smith

Date: 2/28/2021 10:49:00 PM

Definitely one to think on regarding perspective and significance. Hope you are doing ok in 2021. Regards David in NZ

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/16/2021 11:29:00 PM

It was the the best (of times), it was the ..... in lost stars. -R

Weston Gregory

Date: 11/11/2020 4:58:00 PM

stories are! this is a summary of a beautiful one this piece am finding says a lot. nicely done fam.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/16/2020 12:07:00 PM

Love love this..especially the before Adam named the Animals,God named the stars..WoW.

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/4/2020 8:41:00 PM

Extremely thought-provoking, Tim! It's been ages since we've connected. This is Drake...but now I've changed my Poet name to start anew. :) Hope to reconnect soon! Cheers sir!

John Watt

Date: 5/31/2020 2:32:00 AM

Timothy, call me a LOON, but I'd say you're already very good at this form. Amen to your message, plus I love the title and "stories hung aloft" ~ John

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/22/2020 6:46:00 PM

Tim, are you back posting poems after so long an absence? If so, we're very happy to read your work. / Maurice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2020 3:32:00 PM

Your mind is exploring...so much to admire and wonder about as your poem does..you made me stop and think.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/22/2020 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, sorry for late response. ;0)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2020 11:08:00 AM

Hi Timothy - God - omnipotent, omnipresent and omniscient - since time immemorial - beautiful that he named the stars - but you connecting the dots is awesome! Blessings, Jennifer.