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Arunansu Ii

Arunansu 2 the woman loved his name for it reminded her of water great rivers broad and deep the Nile in full flood invades its lands like a lover softly stealing upon a mate showering with a caress of rapids white and blue the Ganges bottomless soul carries blessings to the sea a flow of spirits pass along the wheel to Nirvana Amazon mystery steeped those forever lost explore it still Mississippi carried the Mark music plucked from memories ride the flood on paddle wheels all of these things were, to her, pooled in his name Arunansu.

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Date: 10/28/2017 1:36:00 PM
YES! This is so cool! The way you bring in the different bodies of water and senses and history together. The title, Arunansu - means part of the sun and is an Indian name. I had to look it up! Life path for the astrology minded. A wonderful title for this beautiful poem. <3
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 2:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to look up the name 'Arunansu'. Thank you for letting me know.
Date: 10/28/2017 7:46:00 AM
Very clever poem--love the way you described the many rivers to bring home her feelings!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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