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Hands mixing neutral shades as brushstrokes form etches of life’s vignettes in washed-out tones, Reflecting grim shadows doused by night’s ash Where black white hints Trail along Fingers Stained. Grief In oil Expressing Artist's lament Through paint of tears which words cannot portray. Contest NO 85 for Briand Strand

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Date: 5/2/2018 5:39:00 PM
AMAZING, dear Nette. Many congrats on your #1 placement. Lainie
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Date: 5/1/2018 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette! A lovely well-planned poem. Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/1/2018 9:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/1/2018 4:46:00 PM
This is very nice. The last line is just fantastic.
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Date: 7/28/2016 4:45:00 PM
Well done! You've brought the act of painting to life here.
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:34:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:14:00 AM
Poetry expresses art as well as the brush does. This poem is proof of that Nette. Congratulations on your first place win! Outstanding! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/23/2016 12:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette!. Best wishes, Liz
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Date: 7/22/2016 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations Nette, well executed...
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:25:00 PM
Am back to congratulate you on your fabulous first place, Nette! This had already gone on my fave with a 7! ~karam~
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:39:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 7/22/2016 6:53:00 PM
I love the imagination you have used in the mixing of art and emotions, Nette. Wonderfully written! Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:41:00 PM
wow, a very well deserved top spot, Nette. BIG congratulations.
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Date: 7/22/2016 1:48:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Nette. As an artist myself, your words touched me. Congrats on your first place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/22/2016 1:38:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your 1st place win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/22/2016 1:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 7/22/2016 12:52:00 PM
Nette, Love the painting and your poem was outstanding, congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/20/2016 10:06:00 AM
Stunning write my dear friend, Nette! I'm so glad to read it this evening. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing. Have a great week! Miss you. love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/20/2016 6:34:00 AM
An awesome write Nette, brilliantly done. All the best for the contest - hugs Wilma
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:09:00 AM
An Eckphrasis - life painted with words! The shape too reminds me of an urn - beautiful form and imagery, Nette. You are a winner in my list. All the best for the contest. A 7 and a Fav ~karam~
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:17:00 AM
I love where you took this artistic tetractys:) a #7:) The final tetractys is simply splendid:)
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Date: 7/20/2016 12:15:00 AM
Wow Nette , you have conveyed so perfectly the burden of the artist who pours his soul out on the canvas with every sroke of the brush. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Carl
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