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Artistic License Our mind sees sky as golden glow with dawn's new day on earth below. Our mind thinks sky as azure blue with cotton clouds in daytime view. Our mind sees sunset's orange tint with brilliant visions that imprint. But sometimes nature's artistry will paint her sky with majesty; to think outside the box instead, and blossom in...purple and red. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Sunrise and Sunset Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 02/18/2018 ~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: Last Line Prompt - 2 Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 06/01/2016

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. Lovely.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/10/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thanks, Line, for reading my poem and for your nice comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/19/2018 7:02:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your first place win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:10:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay! Sandra :)
Date: 2/19/2018 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your fine win. Your reading was so appealing.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/18/2018 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved top win for the beautiful poem, Sandra ...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Probir! Sandra :)
Date: 2/18/2018 7:10:00 PM
Oh I just love your poem and your accompanying voice, both are so lovely and smooth as silk! Congratulations Sandra on your fantastic first place win with your rhythmic and beautifully expressive poem. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend.. ~ Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your always so lovely and uplifting comments and warm wishes. I appreciate your visits and supportive words so much. Hugs, Sandra :)
Date: 2/18/2018 6:51:00 PM
Love to listen. Your voice is so soothing and the poem flows well. Congratulations on first place.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis, for your visit and supportive comments and congrats! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/18/2018 4:21:00 PM
Very pretty poem, Sandra! Congrats on your win :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/18/2018 12:09:00 PM
- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise, for your visit and uplifting comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/18/2018 12:06:00 PM
A beautiful poem Sandra, I wish you had written a new one though.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, SO. I should have written a new one, but the one I used seemed to fit well for the photo prompt! Next time. Thanks for the nice placement. Sandra
Date: 11/25/2016 11:05:00 AM
Great poem, great reading. Congrats, Sandra. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/27/2016 4:57:00 PM
Tamal, thank you so much! Sandra
Date: 7/17/2016 6:07:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your " Last Line Prompt" SKAT
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thank you again, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/2/2016 4:26:00 PM
well-worded, Sandra, enjoyed your couplets here. It is truly an artistic child who would choose a sunrise (or sunset) at the art teacher's prompt to paint the sky. And congrats on your placement.
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sandra
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Date: 6/1/2016 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 12:28:00 PM
Very well written...I love listening to your poems.....Congratulations
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis, for your visit and uplifting comment. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 9:27:00 AM
Really a nice poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra on your win in the "Last Line Prompt - 2" contest! You deserve it :) - Hans
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Hansteven, for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 4:52:00 AM
That was very good, Sandra, especially the thinking out of the box leading to the last line prompt. Excellent write. For me the "or minds" bit clicked and set the rhythm. Congrats on a fine win. A seven from me! And a fave. ~karam~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, Karam, for your uplifting comment and supportive feedback on the wording I used! I appreciate your visit, congrats, and the Fav! Sandra
Date: 6/1/2016 4:44:00 AM
A pretty poem, but slightly spoiled by the three-times repetition of "our mind" which made it tedious in the first part. Anyway, well done for this poem doing better than thirty-one others. :) Best wishes, Julia
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 1:10:00 PM
I read your Soupmail, Julia, and I do understand your point about the repetition of the words "our mind." And I began working on your new contest and looking forward to it. Thanks again.
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Julia Ward
Date: 6/1/2016 11:45:00 AM
Hear it though... It's not just "mind", but "our mind", as I said. Both words are rather dull said once, let alone three times. After that, the poem picked up.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/1/2016 8:38:00 AM
Hi Julia, thanks again for another great contest. I am pleased to have made the very short list of winners, and appreciate that you saw its merits despite the word repetition of 'mind'. I guess I just wanted to emphasize that our 'mind' is so used to seeing the ordinary. Again, thank you so much! Sandra
Date: 5/20/2016 3:47:00 PM
Full marks for the total package, Sandra...title, content, imagery, colours and rhyme + the complimentary picture! Enjoyed the author's voice, too:) Regards // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/20/2016 4:04:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you very much for your awesome comments! I love the new audio feature. I appreciate positive remarks. Sandra
Date: 5/19/2016 6:40:00 PM
This is a great poem with a beautiful narration.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/20/2016 4:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Pashang. I appreciate your positive comments. Sandra
Date: 5/19/2016 2:39:00 PM
Wonderfully done with a beautiful picture. G L. A7 for this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/19/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, BL, for your positive and encouraging comment and nice rating! Sandra
Date: 5/19/2016 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful use of purple and red,thanks Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/19/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your visit and positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/18/2016 5:58:00 PM
wow, the audio is neat..good to put a voice with a name. Enjoyed! BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/19/2016 5:24:00 PM
Hi, Barbara, thank you for your nice visit and comments. I love the audio feature. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/18/2016 3:25:00 PM
excellent and a wonderful model for me of how this contest works.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/19/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I am sure you will write something wonderful! Hugs, Sandra

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