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It is difficult to believe there is no catagory for vampires, what kind of poetry place is that????

 

ARTERIAL BITE ---- MONSIEUR L'VAMPYRE Has not my love been welcomed in delight when no one else could woo the heart of thee, so what recourse has moved you to this night of holding back the love you promised me? No mere bloodsucking's what I have in mind but like the finest wine--appreciate what love has layed here at your feet to find, enjoy-- or when you cum, you'll cum too late. No jugular has put out all this much to princes of the dark, forget their claim! now I place no demands on you as such; to choose my love, you've but to say my name. So lay you down, and bare where I should feed; your artery, where flows the blood I need. © Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/5/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Gail and Ovidiu, nice to hear from ladies who might be down by the Seine looking for a vampire. :) Go down on the Left Bank, they are wealthy there. LOL
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:09:00 PM
A lovely written poem
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:42:00 PM
Touching poem... touching the target the noble soul.
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