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Out of the darkness arises color burst Van Gogh starry night sky style The blues disappear in light burst on my night sky Resurrect your kind heart from the pettiness of discontent Your lack of talent at an old age cripples your dry shriveled bean of a heart. Lub-dub! Lub-dub! Lub-dub!? How many ticks before the end?

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Date: 7/15/2016 8:20:00 PM
Hi Doris, Your title caught my attention. And when a I started to read I was not disappointed. It was a moving poetic about an aging person. Excellent write. 7:-) Alexis
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/6/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/15/2016 7:38:00 PM
Hi Doris! Good to seeya! Love this poem! A call for strength! Thank you! jim
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/6/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 7/12/2016 2:56:00 PM
Cute one!!! I wonder who is old???Enjoyed reading your work..Welcome back!! Thanks for all the visits to my page..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..MOM
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/6/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, How are you?

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