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Arrival of Winter

The cool chill of the winter Shivers down, the spine of trees Leaves harden with frost As sun brings warmth Helping grass from coming cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/1/2023 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful descriptions throughout in this write, that opening is really intriguing and eloquent in many ways, perfectly setting up the atmosphere for the reader! I can almost see the winter winds strolling across earth and then the sun embraces us with its warmth!
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 11/1/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it :-)
Date: 10/31/2023 6:27:00 AM
A good poem description of the coming winter. Well done.
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/31/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/31/2023 4:05:00 AM
You described it very well..
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/31/2023 4:28:00 AM
Thanks!

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