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Arrival of Night

Huddled seagulls fearlessly, serenely nap early ignoring calamity; dark offers safety generously... night arrives silently, mysteriously. This lighthouse's brilliance constantly lures captains avoiding distraction, but hastily captivated: ambition and desire palpitate intensely. Entered in nette onclaud's contest, " The Lighthouse " Written by Andrew Crisci on 9/24/2014

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Date: 10/3/2014 7:51:00 AM
Congrats Andrew, this is excellent....Seren
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:47:00 PM
This was challenging to make the syllable counted words flow......which you have brilliantly managed to do. Well done....bit congrats to you, Andrew!
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:03:00 AM
very well composed for a rather difficult form, Andrew... impressive!... my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats!
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:23:00 PM
I never attempted this format, but i see you have it mastered, Andrew, you have a well deserved Win here.
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place.
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 9/28/2014 11:38:00 AM
Andrew, it's lovely to see you with a poem on the top of this list. congrats to you. I think I may have told you this once before, but the first time I came to Soup right before 2010, it was your WIN in an International Soup contest that I first read and I remember thinking, gosh, I want to be like THIS poet! You and others I read that day inspired me to strive to be a success here. Thanks for your poetic visions.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:24:00 AM
many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:11:00 AM
Beautiful piece on the lighthouse and well deserved win, Andrew. congrats on the top place win,
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Date: 9/24/2014 11:37:00 AM
we have loads of seagulls around us wish they would take a long nap they are lethal around if you are having a picnic LOl Hugs Jan xxx
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