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Army Ants

One whisper... The forest floor trembles A path of literal mayhem Untethered to mankind Strangely eschewing Frogs, snakes and lizards "Long Live The Queen" Their Only Anthem! Eternity Their Reward I Fall In 10/01/13

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Date: 11/27/2013 12:01:00 AM
James, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 10/17/2013 11:40:00 AM
jimbo, you were superb in drake's show... hope to bond with you soon with apples in the snow!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/17/2013 8:37:00 AM
Can't find the line Jimbo that needs fixing in Surreal can you till me which verse or line the mistake is in? [You are making me want to sing, the ants go marching 1 by 1 hurrah, hurrah!] Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2013 2:42:00 PM
I like the title and was expecting more. Nevertheless I can see that you have written it from your soul.
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Date: 10/14/2013 7:53:00 AM
Cute one..We don't have army ants here do we?..They are some bad ants..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 10/12/2013 9:56:00 AM
one goal in mind, amazing poetry, just love this...James...
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Date: 10/9/2013 9:49:00 AM
Fantastic. Love this! It reminded me of the movie "Ants" from many years ago.
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Date: 10/6/2013 11:23:00 AM
this queen bites and yes, you delivered the piece with a whip, jimbo.. hope to hear you soon on drake's show again.. you wre good as usal the last time.. carry on!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:38:00 AM
Profound thought well expressed, Jimbo
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