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Aristocratic Child

Beyond the hills White Mountains course the sky. And reaches up to heaven it beseems. In powder blue the fluffy clouds float by. Oh, little child, who innocently dreams. True beauty standing gracefully upright, Adorned in velvet kissed by satin sheens. With ribbons, flowers, laced with pearly white. The hat she wears boasts eloquent designs. A picture perfect child to bring delight Her shaggy little dog whom never whines. With faultless manners always sitting near. Oblivious is he to her bloodlines. Aristocratic child in her own sphere Imagined she was riding with her prince. Enjoying whims and dreams without veneer. She happily lived hoping ever since. © February 16, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Posted for Brian Strand’s Contest: SUIT YOURSELF any theme/any form max 16 lines

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Date: 2/20/2012 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the great win in ~Brian's~ "Suit Yourself" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2012 9:47:00 AM
Many congratulations Dane Ann on your deserved win in Brian's contest. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 2/18/2012 9:03:00 PM
I think your poem Suits all of us. Wonderfully written Dane Ann. Congratulations on your win with this outstanding piece that contains such beautiful imagery.
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Date: 2/18/2012 12:19:00 PM
I'm going to have to change the last line...from >>.She lived happily with hope ever since.<<< to She happily lived hoping ever since. The rhythm seems better to me. Oops! I don't think it changes the meaning...I hope.
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Date: 2/17/2012 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations Dane...Great job Jon
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Date: 2/17/2012 5:59:00 PM
congrats Dane Ann on a ,magnificent win for excellent words luv.. great entry..
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Date: 2/17/2012 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann. Terza Rima poems are fun to write.
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Date: 2/17/2012 2:22:00 PM
Dane Ann, I love the fact you used Terza Rima as your form. It is not an easy form to write in, but you pulled it off. Well done and congrats on winning 3rd place in Brian's contest..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/17/2012 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Dane Ann, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:23:00 AM
Dane Ann, at first I was picturing the little boy blue. It's a famous picture of an aristoratic boy standing in his blue outfit (not sure its name) but it's interesting to see how you made this about a little girl so innocent in her sphere of riches. by the way, I really felt happy that you liked my footles. I was not sure about them because I saw people doing the contest different ways. So happy you approved!
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