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ARGUMENT Uncertain that the day must end some clouds keep hanging on with fingers red and pearly gray to light what's almost gone; their argument is to the sun a lover in retreat from losing battles waged with time who goes down in defeat; and clinging to one breath of life each cloud is mustering to be a force, a shining knight, against what dark might bring. and so the sun sets in a pause much bigger than it's been, alive with hope and energy as if to rise again; but time, the thief, who always wins, knows love has things to steal, and cloaks it all in dark until it's light was never real; and so goes love, into a sleep, and dreaming that some way my love for you shall rise again into another day. © ron wilson aka vee bdosa the doylestown poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/31/2019 5:43:00 PM
Hello Vee Bdosa, arguments everyone does it. It does not work no one wins. It is best to talk it out. Two people yelling goes no where,no one knows what the other is saying when both persons are yelling. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:21:00 PM
Many thanks, I appreciate all of the comments about my work, and Shalom my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:10:00 PM
The words, like a circle of love, drew me in, closer & closer. I heard whisoers of age, wisdom love, second chances, hope ... soft but stunning beauty one word, one day, at a time. Shalom, shalom. Thanx
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Date: 5/21/2018 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful meter, Vee.
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Date: 5/20/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite Wanter.
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Date: 5/20/2018 11:29:00 AM
Just a beautiful analogy of longing. Loved it.
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