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This is an Ode about Namibia. Axali Doeseb is the composer of Namibia’s National Anthem “Namibia, Land of the Brave” (line 5). Namib desert is the world’s oldest Desert at 80 million years (line 9), while sossusvlei is the highest sand-dunes in the world (line 10). The Namib and Damaraland offer remarkably clear skies for astronomers and keen star gazers (line 12). The Northern coast is also called the skeleton coast because of the many sailors who perished on this desolate sandy coast (line 19).

Characterized by the early settlement of the San Bushmen of the Kalahari. Its patriotic sentiments of profound bravery echos the nation’s long struggle for independence well articulated and expressed in the psalm of Axali Doeseb. This second to the least overpopulated territory is home to the continent’s tallest elephants and the endangered black rhino. It houses the world’s oldest desert with a display of the globe’s highest sand-dunes. Quadruple medals from Frankie Fredericks, remarkable atmospheric space for astronomers and star gazers, spectacular deserts in the Kalahari and Namib and the emanating awe from the Namib-Naukluft park are national prides fixed into global glories. Next after the Grand canyon is the Fish river counterpart but the Dragon’s breath stands tall in the globe’s underground lakes. Populates the most in free-roaming Cheetahs, accepts nature’s curse of the historic Northern coast and the sun’s blessing in over three hundred days every year. ‘peace be still’ is the definition of its pride but still not exempted from the painful whip afflicted by the demon enslaving its mother- region.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/20/2015 5:46:00 PM
Intricate piece from you Funom, giving some insight into the diversity of the land, will try to find more time to read more..'
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Joe Maverick

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