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Are You the One

I sit all day and dream of you Wonder if you think of me too I can picture your smiling eyes They are so intense they hide no lies Guess we all have got a past Failed attractions that didn’t last Would you run if I called your name? If we met would we feel the same Would I surrender to your charms And be content in your loving arms Time and tide keep us far apart Are you the one who stole my heart? Jan Allison 13th September 2014

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/14/2014 7:39:00 AM

Jan HHHMM Who is this secret crush you are fantasying about. LOL Very cute and charming write. Thank you for the fun comment on my Music Crimes poem. I am starting to get the hang of it now. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 8:50:00 AM

It could be anyone or no one Robin I will leave the readers guessing ... I write where my muse takes me but I do write a lot of fiction!!!! LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2014 1:42:00 AM

very sweet. now tell me who it is for. heehee. I know I know, you write lots of fiction!! I love how you write of anything and everything. That is how you grow!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 4:29:00 AM

Well Andrea I changed it from blue eyes to 'intense' eyes so it could apply to anyone but I would never kiss and tell anyway... and yes I do write a load of twaddle I mean fiction LOL Hugs Jan xxx