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Are You Proud Now

Open death's eyes. Can you see under the parting of life's hidden lies? I stood there fragile and frail two steps shy of death's door awaiting for you to see how you poisoned me I saw you on my plate, tasted you through the food. I couldn't stand the bitterness, so I spit you out and starved myself I'm skinny on life now unsure how to eat these thoughts that consume my mind and be full again on love, life or anything Does that make you proud?

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Date: 11/25/2019 8:16:00 AM
...so you spit him/her out and starved yourself..(lol) Love that line. Great poem M.O.E. ~Charlie
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Date: 11/25/2019 9:34:00 AM
Sometimes when they are too much to digest we must spit them out! Thank you!
Date: 11/23/2019 1:37:00 PM
Wow. This is deep. I could read this over and over again...
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Musing Over Edges
Date: 11/23/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thank you!

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