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Are You Coming Soon

If you see me there, under a falling moon Where the heart can mend and the pain can end Before a lonely sky, where the morning cries Will I hear your voice? Will you come to me, give your heart a choice? And when the moon travels far, will you stay away, as I watch it die near a burning star To lose this love, in an unkind night Filled with watery eyes and no delight Will you see me there, under a falling moon? Are you coming soon? And if you do , will the sun finally rise from the days so long when our love was wrong and we lost our song are you coming soon are you coming soon 11/11/14

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Date: 10/7/2020 9:13:00 PM
A melancholy, pensive poem of hopeful longing, Frederic. I really like the repetition of your phrase "are you coming soon?" Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:13:00 PM
Great write , Frederic, in Linda's contest. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/20/2014 3:23:00 PM
Lovely, poignant lyrics, Frederic! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:47:00 PM
I love the imagery in the poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:21:00 PM
A sad, beautiful write, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:43:00 AM
so beautifully expressed - many congrats Frederic:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:12:00 PM
Your poem was so beautifully expressed and the imagery, though sad, was lovely, as well... Congrats on your win, Frederic!
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:57:00 AM
Conteplative, yearning...very human emitions, nicely written, Frederic! jmg
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Date: 11/12/2014 11:28:00 AM
Frederic, good write, hope and sadness. Good luck in the contest :) eve
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