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Arctic Sunset - For Contest

arctic sunset numbed by frozen sea cold streaks ignite molten sky embers hiss in death John g. Lawless 11/16/2015 submitted to – Sunset – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 7:07:00 PM

Fantastic imagery, JOhn! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congrats for your win, John. And have a lovely Thanksgiving.

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 4:26:00 AM

John, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 8:57:00 PM

Wonderful write! Congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/23/2015 11:51:00 AM

"molten sky" very lovely visual, John. Congrats.

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Lin, always appreciated your kind words.

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 11:02:00 AM

Very nice , John. Strong powerful imagery.

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM

Thanks James

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/23/2015 10:25:00 AM

Love the onomatopeia! CongratsJohn!

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:20:00 PM

Damn, that's a long, bouncy, hill filled, juggernaut of a word. thanks for stopping by to comment Balveen.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/23/2015 10:18:00 AM

Nice visual stirred through your words, John. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, I have a very visual mind....the challenge being to draw the picture with words. appreciate the comment.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations John.

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:16:00 PM

thanks Nayda.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/18/2015 3:49:00 PM

Lovely imagery, John; can imagine the burning sun hissing as it slides into the sea! gl in the contest. // paul

John Lawless
Date: 11/23/2015 2:15:00 PM

thanks Paul, always nice to hear from you, appreciate the comment.