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Arctic Land of Sin

Within this wasteland, cold, lost and without light lye the corpse of a man, hopeless and without life. But what was so bold, to take life from a man? Was it the bitter cold, or the loneliness of the land? In this land he once fought, for reasons unknown. Perhaps he had thought, he wasnt going to die alone. If loneliness were sin, may his soul be damned. Have fires burn him fom within, to where he cannot withstand. This is what he deserves, nothing more nothing less. But he still waits for her, so his soul may be put to rest. This land full of ice and sin, beats like a loveless organ. The burial of many men, where love and peace were all so foreign. Welcome to the land, The Arctic Land Of Sin. Where the life of a lonley man, never saw a compassionate end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2012 6:12:00 AM
Loneliness is quiet like you describe- a bitter place void of friend or one to love- but we can change course- love and blessings, Bren
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 1/11/2012 6:14:00 AM
Sorry, that previous comment was intended for the induvisual under you. But thatnk you for taking out your time. =)
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 1/11/2012 6:13:00 AM
Wow. What a wonderful greeting. I couldnt feel more welcome right now. Thank you so much for taking out of your time to do this for me =)
Date: 1/11/2012 6:06:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Charles. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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