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1st verse Unless I'm holding true if I'm not loving on cue I cannot function I lie here with conjunction woe I cannot fight this I care as do I miss you 2nd verse I imagine this almost constant your words I'm glued to quadrant though at times they're cruel I've allowed you to rule oh I wish I didn't I love you as a sweet fondant Chorus I'm constantly waiting on your arrival we're not on the same path of survival I can't even form a sentence you've got me in repentance so I'll continue longing for you my arch-rival Chorus (repeat)

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Date: 12/8/2020 5:03:00 PM
Hello Angela … a fine lyric indeed Angela. You could do well with this write - well done - Lindsay
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/8/2020 4:45:00 PM
Oh yeah me too, I would love to hear it too. It’s perfectly written, Angela, I loved it :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/6/2020 6:52:00 PM
I would like to hear this in a sound bite Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/5/2020 8:09:00 AM
Quite a lovely poem with a creative title, Angela. Longing can be so sad! ~ Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/5/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 12/5/2020 7:34:00 AM
Seems a tad sad to me, but what a lovely write. You have a knack of getting our attention. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/5/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. I try :)
Date: 12/5/2020 6:03:00 AM
Bittersweet memories come to surface--reflective write, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/5/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 12/5/2020 3:30:00 AM
Sounds like a nice song Angela... Will you sing it?
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/5/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. Actually, I'd prefer if someone else sang it. I used to do my own demos years ago, but not anymore :)

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