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Archibald Mouse

Have you heard the latest, kiddies? Archibald Mouse is confused He thinks he's a big scary tiger So no more chewing on shoes! Though he doesn't have any tiger stripes He says they came off in the bath Also says the soap made him shrink He sure can make people laugh! He tries to let out a big tiger roar But all that comes out is a squeak Archie's been trying so very hard In fact he's been trying for weeks! Gotta feel for this cute little critter Perhaps there's a blow-up pill That when he takes it he gets real big Last I heard he was trying still! So even if you're just a wee tike Remember to keep thinking big Keep trying hard to better yourself And you'll wind up dancing a jig! © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:12:00 PM
    this is cute. It looks like one for a big children's book!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 2/7/2013 5:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    With all the great comments I've received lately, I'm actually considering a children's picture book! Need to find a top notch illustrator! Thanks Andrea... big hugs!
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:39:00 AM
    You can strill dance a jig when you're little, too. Your friend Carol.... I'm worried... several days without comments back... I hope you're just busy...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 2/6/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear dear sweet Carol! Lotsa STUFF happening here... ALL good, no BADDIES!!! Worry not my sweet one... I will read your latest shortly! Love and big smooches, the old guy! LOL
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Another witty and humorous poem. Nice work jack.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 2/6/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are fast becoming one of the great friends here on the Soup... thanks bunches! Cheers, Jack