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Aquatic Lady

If you could be me As you look through my eyes What would you see Below our natures skies Arching in her waters Curves of pure delight Cascading dark hair hangs Complexion fresh and bright Followers of this beauty Grace and fly her sky Every time she surfaces There is going to be goodbyes When she swims, she swims In undulation move So natural like her beauty Graceful and so smooth So if you could be me As you look through my eyes My aquatic lady wows This merman can only sigh http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2010 8:59:00 AM
James, this is my favorite of yours I read this morning.It is really cute!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:14:00 PM
Sorry that you have become a merman...Maybe there is hope with just one kiss that the magic will happen and you'll become human again. Great write. Alluring drew me in and held my attention. Sara
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:11:00 PM
She may have taken up residence in Atlantis, James. The merman would be welcome there too! But don't let the saltwater sting your eyes as you ogle her. LOL Delightful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2010 3:33:00 PM
A very visual portrait of a lovely creature James... elegant words from your gifted pen tonight.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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