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Aquatic Beauty

Between reality and a sweet dream I dive in the waves, a vision serene Swimming freely in a sunlit sea scheme Engulfed with marine life, troubles unseen Floating effortlessly on the jet stream I dive in the waves, a vision serene The sea is magical, beauty supreme Enchanting colors bedazzle blue-green Floating effortlessly on the jet stream The waters breed life in a brilliant sheen Gently caressed by the ocean's warm gleam Enchanting colors bedazzle blue-green In coral and caves, unknown life forms beam Aquatic beauty untouched and pristine Gently caressed by the ocean's warm gleam To never surface, a true mermaid queen Between reality and a sweet dream Aquatic beauty untouched and pristine Swimming freely in a sunlit sea scheme In the Deep Sea Contest Entry Sponsor: Gautami Phookan Third Place

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Date: 4/10/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:03:00 PM
a beauty of a poem. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:33:00 AM
Love this and super picture there congratulations Rhonda xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:18:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a wonderful write and well deserved win.. your talent is so evident. your gift so special .. happy easter blessings luv..
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:48:00 PM
a highly skilled use of form! Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 4/5/2012 3:43:00 PM
Beautiful lines and excellent form. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:47:00 PM
Aquatic beauty indeed, a beautiful story poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:13:00 AM
this flows like a gush of pure waterfall, rhonda.. a poetic delight!... best wishes an hugggs! :)
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Date: 3/12/2012 2:20:00 AM
Very pretty and descriptive entry. Gautami should like this one.
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:53:00 AM
That is so serene- I love the sea and always as a child wanted to be a mermaid and live in the sea. Thank you : )
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:11:00 AM
HA HA !!! I AM THE FIRST TO READ THIS. Actually, u see, I sit online 24/7 and wait to be the first one to read Everyone's poems on Every Poetry site that EVER existed. That way, I will be remembered as the greatest new poem reader of all time! Ha! btw I think u did a MORE than great job on the descriptions of the pristine aquaticA!~:)
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