Aquatic

Walk by the water See the fish swimming along Take joy in the moment

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/2/2019 9:55:00 PM

This poem takes me back to a warm summer's day, which is such a nice vision to have in the middle of a very cold winter season ... Nicely done, Matthew!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2019 9:41:00 PM

simple but nice. A soothing place to go!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/2/2019 7:44:00 PM

Yes, in that single moment, be. Fish are always so peaceful to watch. Well penned.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/2/2019 2:41:00 PM

This lovely haiku reminds me of Hawaii Matthew. We often see the dolphins leaping our of the water in joy! Happy New Year my friend! : ) xxoo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2019 7:55:00 AM

refreshing 'ku which delights me, matthew... good work!... huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2019 5:50:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery Matthew, a very pretty little poem. I am surrounded by the sea on our little Island, don't mind being on the shore but rarely see fish close by and i am not a boat fan lol:-) very best wishes for 2019:-) hugs Jan xx