April

showers all day the bay tree curtseys low

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Deneen White

Date: 1/22/2009 3:22:00 PM

beautiful haiku, I can see this so clearly, take care D-nyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/22/2009 2:36:00 PM

curtsies Hugs Debbie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/22/2009 10:39:00 AM

This paints a beautiful picture of a spring shower. Lovely haiku. Love, Robin

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/22/2009 6:54:00 AM

LOvely my friend, the imagery seems to pop in this one. Michael

Elaine George

Date: 1/22/2009 4:25:00 AM

Beautiful picture, Brian. Lainie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/21/2009 11:54:00 AM

Soothing visual with lovely Personification. Love, Shar

James Foulk

Date: 1/21/2009 11:25:00 AM

makes me wish spring would hurry up and get here, it would be ok to forget winter.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/21/2009 8:42:00 AM

I loved this piece, it speaks softly, with a gentle touch. ~ Nice one! Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/21/2009 8:22:00 AM

Love this piece Brian..so much elegance in this piece...I do remember cricket being played and the West Indies and England going at it..they would gather around the radio..beautiful memories.