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Apricot

The way to eat an apricot Most do it without little thought But when I ate apricots today I had so much more to say It's unique orange has a glow Makes your eyes twinkle like snow I guess what I'm trying to explain Is that when you're eating don't be a pain Give everything a little thought When it matters or even not You have to think from all points Connect the ends make them joints You have to know what your in for Take your time in life's every tour I walked into the pantry today and sought Life's little path called apricot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 1:00:00 PM
I agree, makes me hungry and inverted-wood pyramids float in my mouth jojojojojo I liked this, I mean, not too many persons take time to look at something so simple and common as a fruit and make a whole deal out of it; you know how to make life fresh; thanks for the experience, yei!!!=D
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Date: 4/22/2009 7:28:00 PM
An exquisite existential metaphor ... apricot, very alluring.
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:26:00 PM
Sweet descriptions, great work...Raul
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:21:00 PM
to appriciate Gods gifts we should take our time and observe the details. nicely writen. john h loving iii
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Date: 4/20/2009 2:13:00 PM
Whoa, I know what you mean, I had apricot jelly in my sandwich today; it was delicious
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